Soul Fragments - Reviews

I’m so loving Ariadne. She beaten but she in not broken. I do think she has cracks. She has such a fiery attitude

You know what I like it. You have to write more chaps coz this is a good story. And your a good writer btw.I'll put this on my library and comment from time to time to support you haha so please update a little faster. *wink wink*

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According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though.And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.

I'm truly impressed by the plot development and narration of this story, It is well-crafted and captivating. The contrast between Reigan and Celine is really strong and I do want to read more!

Arnav says okay and disconnects the call.

Epsilon was nearby, he was sitting cross-legged on the same smooth stone surface she'd been lying on, gazing out at the clouds.

[Fine, but remember what you can!]

"Hey, you're that round face girl from UA! What are you all doing here?"

and slowly whispered in my ears "Ah!!you're finally here. You have kept me waiting. So how have you been??" I didn't even knew him so I was I supposed to react to that. I simply said that I've been good but do I know you. He looked surprised and took another look at me. Then he went towards the president who was not the president anymore. He talked to her briefly and then came back to me and said "never mind, we can always make new memories together. But first you need a haircut." After that I will show you around and then we will start practicing magic. Then he gave me a haircut himself. Just when I was thinking how could a great master be like this , my haircut was done. For a second I couldn't recognize myself. But I kept my calm. Then he told me that there ate total 3 sects in the place. The main hall is "The Hall of Joy". That is where I was supposed to live with master. Soon it was time for lunch. So master decided that since it's my first day here I can have lunch with him in the mess. As soon we reached there master....

"WOW, an egg pokemon, thank you very much" - said Dante while hugging his parents. "What kind of pokemon is it?" - continued the young man.

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