Sono Shiro sae Uso dato Shitemo - Reviews

In my opinion this is probably one of the best novel i've ever read. Sorry for not giving u guys better review cuz this is my first time ever giving review. Matters aside, u guys should try this novel.

Interesting.

Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk)Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel;Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though)I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me)Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)

Why does the guy turn arrogant the first moment he gets power and he doesn't even know how his own world works as he is foolish to trust people and doesn't understand how one must survive as he calls everyone senior but gets betrayed by them at every second and why does he care about the others in the valley he should just ignore them and cultivate alone. He is also a cowardas he didn't dare enter the dream world for ten years so he is quite foolish

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"En."

Simultaneously, another round and beer bellied, huge muscle man tightly grabbed her arms while two short and thin weasel like twins grabbed either of her legs.

The heretic then opened his hands and blue flame suddenly appeared he then looked coldly at Zeth before throwing the flame at him.

"Jules, pabayaan na natin ang dalawang yan. Dyan sila masaya. Kumain na lang tayo." Sabay akbay ng binata sa dalaga upang magtuloy na sila sa canteen.

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And we could all use a little change

After that the screen split into four different pictures. The four pictures showed different places of Dressrosa. Ezio hit Sugar and she lost conscious. After that something shocking happened. All the toys in Dressrosa transformed back into humans. While this shocking scene happened, Ezio explained the power of Sugar's devil fruit to the world. There were families who cried after they reunited and everyone could see the underground base of Doflamingo with all their slaves and weapons. It was shocking to see the peaceful Dressrosa that was in chaos after all the toys transformed back. The whole world saw what Doflamingo did to this island with the power of this girl named Sugar. Even for the cruelest rulers of this world, this was a shocking event.