I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!?
is the mc able to take damage or not, you say in the same sentence multiple times he didn't take any damage yet is somehow fatally wounded? this story makes no sense, and transitions between paragraphs are like getting gut-punched in the brain. Various grammer and spelling errors throughout makes it even worse. If I could give the world building a zero I would, nothing is explained.
Hey! This is my first novel.Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas.I hope you guys still able to enjoy it!Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel.Thank you so much!
It is a good story and i really liked how story is developing . I highly recommend u guys to read it once or just give a try to this story For me i liked this story and ofc the all characters and character development
Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde.This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
The sight unfolding in front of me confirmed my guess as correct. A big river separated the dark forest I came out of from a vast expanse of grassland. I can even distinguish the vague shape of a town in the far distance.
Scarlett and veronica sit on sofa and talk with each other and I say I will make cold milkshake for you both Scarlett i make chocolate and for you Veronica pan I say it
The wings of the Petaled Dragon had, indeed, scales similar to petals. If there was a pink Sakura tree nearby, the bundle would blend right in. The little dragon came right up to Lou, disregarding the scared rabbit beside her. The System explained some things before telling her that she just needed to interact with it often, she didn't need to take care of it. Lou sighed in relief and left the farm with Reiko in her arms.
