Son born of Darkness and Light (mature content) - Reviews

Hi! I am the author! I will shamelessly rate my novel 5 stars, I will apologize in advance if I wrote the wrong words or grammar, forgive me for that. This is my first time writing ML. Thank you so much for sparing your time reading this. This novel is not just about romance. We will also tackle the struggles of being a youth, hardship over friendship and family problems. I want to deliver a great and smooth flowing novel to all of you. Please continue to support me until the end. THANK YOU SO MUCH WITH ALL MY HEART.

Website : qidian china Views : 6.02 million Rating : 7.3(1673) Chapters : 989Status : ongoingrank : 8 Word count : 2.94 millionauthor rank : lv5

The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.

The start was good but when he came back to earth the story last its charm.

so its like final destination then? the adjucator of death also has scenarios like these if anybody is interested.............................

I have fall in love with this book i cant wait until More chapterS come but until then i will wait For the new readers please dont give up on this book !

Oh, so the Main Character of this story is the sects master/leader. He is trying to bring back glory? The Main Character seems to have a weird personality.

So far so good, to me the story is above average.I like the concept of the story but the execution of it is below average. Certain things are rushed and the author tries to build an air I mystery but he did a bad job at it.The tension is less as the character descriptions. But the concept is very good and it hooks a reader wanting to read more about what will happen next.

Pretty interesting, Here’s 5 star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

"ROOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRR!!!" Crigil roared in response to seeing this! This was a roar of rage and fear! He knew the leading Ogul must have realized he was their leader and proceeded to focus all attacks on him! Crigil as he caught himself mid roar called back out to the troops "I'll be bait this time! it's been a while since I've had such a challenging fight! You lot better do your jobs and start detaining these one by one before I die!" He screeched this and lept headfirst into the battle and by doing so every Cenive that was apart of this party that was secretly working for his father felt touched and even gave some respect to this brave but foolish Cenive who was risking his life for a suicide mission.

"Ei!"

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