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Sinful Temptations
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Another one novel autor using us to review his work then dumping us with this premium thing. What can i say, it's not nice. Better get it down the ladder so others know not to start reading it. Sorry
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please dont drop                                                                                                                             
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This comment is unnecesary because I know for sure that you will enjoy reading this one, please make sure to put more comments and stars for this novel for them to pit it on edditors choice and we can start voting on it :-)
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Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didn’t make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would  not have all of these problems.
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The writing is good, the updates are consistent, the story development seems solid, the characters are original, and the background seems to be well thought out. Still, I'd enjoy seeing a bit more focus on the description of the setting and what the characters look like. To the author: Feel free to check out my original Avatar The Last Airbender spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you would like.
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Grammar is a little :( but in overall measures, you are doing good. The novel hooked me and I don't plan to leave it soon. Loved madd and Jessica relation and how they met. Also loves the way you search for real-life data to insert in your novel, this gives a good realistic taste and its very good.You can get better with the time, and i am looking after it
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hey man did ya drop it and where can I find the mtl
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It's super cool. Read IT
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the story is good, just it needs more content as there are very few chapters
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An overwhelming sense of relief flooded through Aaron's shoulders, but as he unlocked the door a nagging question tugged at his brain.
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the man thought for a moment and seemed to have an idea.
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They were sure having fun...

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