Short Storys - Reviews

Awesome story telling. Feels different from most other stories because of the Gutu empire! Long live the Gutu empire. For real: the journey the character undertakes is similar. For example -> the MC is a coward when he's young, but that characteristic isn't really seen anymore because he's strong. Just like most Xuanhua's.

I wish I can give out zero stars. Read upto 40 free chapters so I can say story is not good.You can just skim the fighting scenes and read to to finish 40 chapter faster cause those scene doesnt make much sense and are repetitive - annoying. World building is basically trash.

I'm wishing for a good world background explanation but not too many details, can fill that in later on into the novel.Clean and ****** Realms. Easy to understand and follow.. Not too overbearing of a main character PLEASE. Awakening 3 lifetimes worth of memories and if he still acts like some young impulsive guy I swear.. Past 2 and current lifetime. 3 worlds. Many stuff to make up on. Many stuff to relate to. Many stuff to make something out of nothing. That's what I meant to say.

i love how the author is very open minded regarding his work. taking all the criticism seriously. i really respect that aspect of him. strives to improve his novel just so that readers can enjoy his novel more. i love how he's so detailed in fight scene, but being detailed also has its drawbacks that readers might find it annoying if the fighting drags a bit too long. overall, enjoyed the novel hopefully author has more works like this in the future

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"I know. I would love the same but for now, let's try our best because the future of the people is in our hands. You might have a lot of questions but you'll soon know everything... just at the right time." At the right time, he said... I hope it's not too late...

Echidna : "You, the son of the Earth Devil Eden, was gifted an incredible gift. The gift of Magic. You were one of the first Mages in the universe. However, you decided to use your powers wisely."

I looked around and noticed a girl 12 years old with about 30% similarity with me. She should be the girl that my bastard father had with my aunt.

"I am Prince Duan, since when has it been your turn to speak before me? Do you wish to die?"

[Ah, is this on? Excuse me, I'm Kurahashi from Flower River.]

She regretted the fact the she didn't appreciate her home enough in the past, although she loved and respected it, she still felt like she didn't have enough time to see all that it had to offer before her death. This was mainly due to her duties as king which kept her busy most of the time, preventing her from roaming the country side and just enjoying everything that she was able to experience in her own kingdom.

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