Автор написал в синопсисе, что будет писать и обосрался, лови какашку придурок, если нет сил писать, пиши блять на черновике, весь сайт уже, такие долбаебы как ты, засрали начатами и не законченными фанфиками.
Early review here! I don't know what the first word in this novel is but the synopsis got my attention! Really like cultivation in a modern world so this gets an instance of credibility from me. I'm tired of the whole clan, sect, young master b.s. and a more advanced society could do this genre better imo.
"I read until chapter 27, so here's my review: the writing quality is okay if you are a beginner reader. The story development was okay but not really unique, as it resembles more of a cultivation world (where characters kill and become stronger until the end). Our character's thinking is on track and fully developed, so you won't be bothered if the main character is dumb or makes silly mistakes. Anyway, the overall performance of the writing is good. The world background was also explained in detail."
Day 1 of waiting until author releases a new chapter :) ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
he never has such reaction even when women is naked in front of him or tried to seduce him , so he wonder why getting this feeling now , he doesn't want to look at her but no matter how much he tried to look away he end up looking at her .
