Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife.... Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them... also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR