Seirei Gensouki: Spirit Chronicles - Reviews

Someone any idea how long it will take to finish this book? Will they have a happy ending or sad? As reading unfinished book is scary.

The reincarnation story is not as realistic as the title suggests, but for a green writer, it isn't bad. I love the new Dojutsu, but I find it completely unnecessary when he already has Mokuton. The baby should have been traveling with Tsunade and Shizune after the death of his parents. Backstory I made up: some Senju parents (Tsunade's cousin is the father) leave the village to live safely away from the shinobi life and death. The mother gets assassinated during her pregnancy after the sudden death of her husband. In this story, the being saves the child by having Tsunade walk by and reincarnates you instead of the baby that should not have existed. The mother still dies because this is her fate one way or another. I mean, this is important for the creation of a relevant main character. I believe that the writer would have had an easier time with the story if he added only the Dojutsu to the mc. No need for a headache to sort the backstory, if you know what I mean.

good story, I want my more, no I need more, so make more or di- I mean or you get bad grades at school.------------------------------------------

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Somewhat interesting, but terrible execution.The entire game makes no sense. It’s ruined by pay to win elements such as: 1) most powerful characters require absurd amounts of money to play and free characters can never surpass them; 2) costs absurd amounts of money to revive (‘free’ characters cost $2 per level, and it only goes up exponentially depending on the grade or type of character); 3) literally everything in the game costs money. Want to revive your ally? Cha-ching! Open your own dungeon? Cha-ching!Not to mention the fact that a level 48 character (one of the highest in the game) is unable to take on more than 5 level 10-15 characters in the starting area even though their gear is significantly better.A three skeleton boss can’t even take on a one star hero healer and a two star tank with a few randoms, yet apparently the game is balanced.Essentially, the game makes no sense, and everything is one dimensional. Whether something is strong or not depends on what suits the author’s plot.

Being the first work of the author, I must say I am highly impressed. The world building and character design went beyond my expectations. A very good book to be precise.

i just love this novel ..nowadays you get to see novel where mc is perverted or evil or indifferent or selfish and where in many novel pure family relationships is not there.so i like most in here is way mc family value relationship and mc too is a responsible and positive person so this novel has become my favorite.also i like it because of harem of course but grammar and lemon chapters are good too.i would recommend people to give it a try .and author please i hope you don't discontinue this novel.

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Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences.Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say.Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.

Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions.Keep it up.

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The fairy signaled them to sit down and they did. She explained "Long,long ago, us mystic beings lived in harmony with you. No matter the creature you were classified as good or as evil. The good wanted to protect and the evil wanted to destroy. A fairy like me can be evil or can be good and a vampire can be good or evil. If a mystic is good they will brightly sparkle in color and if they are bad they will be covered in a shadow of gray. This is the time when Alex K. Reality was bullied by an evil being, a troll named Akuwaru…."Foster interrupted "Reality? The famous family of the reality's?"