Ruling the new world as a Goddess : My Husbands/Family and the immortal me - Reviews

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some writing mistakes but it's English which is a hard language even for native speakers

Having no interest in tempting the armored man's wrath the caged man obliged slowly stepping out of the cage. Though shackles that clung to his ankles tightly didn't give him much of a choice otherwise. After he left the cage he eyed over his shoulder the keyring still attached to the door.

"UNCLE! OLD!" He screamed. He then took out a mirror out of who knows were. Looking at his face, he sighed with relief. Just as he was about to put the mirror away, he saw a bit of dust on his face.

"Wake up, we need to leave."

"She is the one," He told them.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

"Sorry I took so long… I got a little delayed as Vali wanted to confirm some things with me" Bikou shrugged. The person he was answering to was a very beautiful and voluptuous young woman. She had long black hair with split bangs, hazel-gold colored eyes with cat-like pupils. The woman in question wasn't appearing to be wearing much and left very little to the imagination, even to the oh so sweet talking Bikou, she was wearing a black kimono, a yellow obi with a set of golden beads tied around her body.