Rules of Magic - Reviews

Overall it was pretty much just like a summary of what happened and for me that really likes world building and kingdom building/with machines similar to the novel mechanical god emperor it would have been nice if he went more into detail in the beginning if it went to a different direction with more like a dedicated volume one rebuilding earth and volume 2 wormhole to another world appears would be so much better imo but nah he wakes up and rebuilds earth in 2 chapters so no build up or momentum in the story so its very bland but i like the concept as i view it as a rts game like stellaris not sure what future chap has in store but already disappointed in lack of details and fleshing out the story.

Story is good and all, but I really start to hate the Mc…. Currently chapter 10 or so, but if I were the system I would have already killed the Mc and searched for another host.

"Mom, Dad can you  keep this a secret please?"

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

I can't believe it , what happened in the restaurant. I never ever in my dream thought that he would do this. He is really a crazy person . But  I kinda like it in fact I love it. I know he is sexy but damn that sexy. I never imagined that. Ughh Get a grip Ara. What is happening to me. I should not find him sexy.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

Keep up the good work. Don't try to stretch the legal battle, try to make it like 4-5 chapters regarding the inheritance legal. Pics of all the characters and the MC pairing??

This is very outstanding!!!. The author really captivates the mind the readers at the very beginning  of the novel. I can't wait to finish the book.

Violet’s trauma is being handled so well. The pacing of her mental breakdown feels realistic. She’s strong, but not immune—and that makes her feel real.