Rising Moon, Floating Star (ATG) - Reviews

This story is Awesome. It could easily become a top 10 original novel on this site in my mind. The only issue keeping this story back from being one of the best? Grammar. The Author appears to be using Machine Translations to translate this story leaving it full of terrible Grammar. At least the spelling is on point. If the author had an English speaking Editor go through this it will rapidly rise in the rankings. But as is? This story will turn newcomers off really REALLY fast. The grammar is just that horrendous. people even defend the author talking about how he/she has no obligation to better his grammar. Then he paywalls it?

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The cover art is a photoshop of The Way of the Devil, I kek-ed. Scratch that it looks like it was done with paint. Honestly an interesting concept but the pacing and character development is totally missing. The translation is good though, the book itself is not.

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The first novel i read without old grandpa , reincarnation , system , op cultivation technique , op weapon , tournament ,  spacial ring/ bag , sect ,  harem hoarding mc , no bull**** infinite years secluded meditation , clone/avatarThis novel is really great it gives me fresh exp with right amount of comedy ,seriousness , drama and a very fitting iron lady to be the main female leadPlus the most important factor isI LOVE YOU LOULAN!!!!!!!!!!!

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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I absolutely love this book 11/10! There's just something about the crafting and world building that makes it feel so magical and real. I can't put this book down I binged it in a day (7ish chapters as of this review) and I can't wait to read more. I've never read a book from the perspective of an old man and I have to say I prefer it to the rest now. If you're looking for a fun and magical read I'd highly recommend this!

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Even if the magic concept of this story is good, the author does not have a good grasp of his story. Details are explained after the fact. A timeline constructed before writing would help the author to have a better grasp of his narration

This is the strongest first 60 chapters I have ever read in a Chinese webnovel.  It does a brilliant job of setting up the story, and I strongly recommend anyone check this one out.  It's a shockingly impressive beginning.