Rising Dragon - Reviews

Writing quality - 3 starsNo obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary (also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying) Update stability - 3 starsI'm neutralStory development - 3 starsThe pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)Character design - 2 starsCharacters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)World background - 2 starRarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity (there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting) It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obviousGood to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...

good book, I want it to carry on so please vote for it, for some reason all the bad main stream books get picked. it seems like such a bad choice. why not choose good books instead of bad ones sad was

The story is good and the steal function is great. Hopefully he won't turn into a degenerate and start stealing pan***s like a certain character. At some points the story extension seemed unnecessary; just to reach a certain word limit. It could be more concise and still be good in those parts.

I like this story a lot and hopes it will be interesting in the future as well and be of more chapters

"What, are you saying you want me to run around dressed in that?"

"Thank you" I breathed in and out and took it running back to the school.

But Xu Xinya was not going to yield to him easily.

"There is an underground part of this place, she is there."

Behind her, Bellona became keenly aware that Ares was growing more and more silent. She wet her lips in anticipation.

He shoved me away and grabbed Emily's neck and opened his mouth it was just like before just like what happened to my family and my friend. Some kind of red smoke came out of Emily and went into that guy's mouth. I couldn't move but still, I did not want the same thing that has happened to my childhood friend to a friend a genius friend that I made just a few minutes ago. I picked up a sword I charged towards him he blasted me off with ease. I felt pain after a long time. Things were getting out of control Emily's life was being taken away I could not do anything. I was suffering from intense pain. Still, I got up suddenly I saw a guy with a black cape and a black and white katana. He sliced the possessed dudes. I felt intense pressure from him maybe it was his aura. He dashed past the Imps and went towards that old guy but the old guy quickly vanished and he came behind me but wait it wasn't the old man it was Emily. I was shocked her eyes were red her voice changed the katana dude went right past me and tried to slice her with intense speed but she blocked it easily.

"Come out Lucius Malfoy you are under arrest for being a known Death Eater. This goes for everybody else in that manor" said Amelia in a calm voice.

"Hey, Shirou. Are you excited about tomorrow? I heard the captains will be taking us to see the knight selection and after that will be our ceremony to get a grimoire, isn't it exciting?" Mimosa asked while continuing to sit on my back.