Rise of the Serpent - Reviews

An excellent twist on the classic cultivation story. Well written and thought out. The only way this story could be better is a lot more Zombies.

Should use the punctuations more accurately! Don’t put the comma like , this. You should do so like, this. Other than that, this feels like a good parody work to chill and go through. Short, funny, and direct chapters about a very powerful MC… This will be very likable to those who like their MC as overpowered as possible

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The story is nice and All, but the pacing is sooo freaking slow, how can we take that long just to get out of the testing area? it's not even the Tutorial, that part is supposed to be weeding of the trash and early glimpse of what is to come, so a breeze for our regressor mc that once stood at the peak, even if it's a challenge with his current abilities it won't take too long to finish but no, we spend more than 70 chapter on this. it's just so painfully slow

"Naruto, what were you doing?" Sakura asked, bringing up a fist to punch him…and then putting that fist down and taking a deep breath to let out her anger. "What happened?"

    What he cares is own Dan said.

Rika's smirked and leaned back on the couch, "Any stalker that knows the address to my house would know what sits in my driveway, Komuro."

- Vocês estão muito, mas muito encrencados! - Gritou o professor nervoso, Isaac pegou na mão de Lyra e correu em direção a floresta.

'Well it's fine since I arrived before the appointed the time, I guess I have no choice but to wait for her.' Kyle thought but the main problem was that it was already quarter to 2 which was the sunniest time and the heat was killing him.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed