Rise of Sin - Reviews

May I know which novel should I read first?

Knew from the start I am following and wld keep following cos like I said ure a star in eyes well done wish u could be alot fast but I understand,with ur exams on the way and all other stuff

Pretty good story. It is short but I don't think that the length does a disservice to the story. It doesn't harp on things that have no impact on the story

The best description I could give this would be a fast-food novel.It's basically just fighting continuously for several hundred chapters, with little to nothing in-between.There is not really any harem even though the novel advertises it as such - as it really wouldn't make any difference whether the characters were male or female considering the lack of meaningful dialogue.Chapters are short, events are quick and to the point and while nothing really stands out, there really aren't any aspects of the story that are unforgivably bad. It isn't exactly a good read, but it's easy on the eyes.

Story jumps from plot to plot and has very little build up of events or world. Grammar is good and I never fault a writer for updates, unless they make promises they don't keep.

"Is that all that's left of the Kiras? Just some old bones with regret? Not a single ounce within you to revenge those you held dear? Not even one single bit of you wishes to get beyond your limits and revenge them?" Hati said with a strong and captivating voice.

Fujimoto permaneció unas horas hasta que el joven soldado estuviera estable, una vez que despertara todo estaría bien, sin embargo, se debatía entre quedarse o irse,  quería ser lo primero que viera pero a la vez no sabia si soportaría la mirada de rechazo. Finalmente optó por irse cuando, al levantarse sintió una fuerza en su manga, al voltear se cruzó con los ojos vidriosos de Carlos. Por inercia regreso al asiento y tomó su mano, deseaba decir algo pero se encontraba perdida en la suavidad y tibieza de esa mano.

        "Medyo." Sumandal nalang ito at pinikit ulit ang mga mata. "Ingat sa pagdrive, bro. Ayoko pang mamatay." Sambit nito.

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          Lena opened her eyes slowly, her smile fading... she was having this feeling that someone was watching her.  She looked down, and found Marco with some guy, seated in the garden below.  Her eyes finally landed on the pair of eyes that had been watching her!  Suddenly, everything seemed to stop! It was glowing all around like someone just turned all the lights on! And her heart was beating so loudly, she wanted to silence it but couldn't!  It was actually just in a split of a second, but when eyes meet eyes, and the owners are destined for each other, a phenomenon such as this happens... Tomorrow is indeed a new day.

just when it was getting interesting you stop ignore the haters just be you and write what you want to...….

"Sorry for worrying you, and I'm fine by the way, just an odd dream I got or might be a nightmare."