Return of the Fallen Angel: Book 1 - Reviews

The backround story isn´t bad I hope later it answered why the MC was able to get back in time. And the MC is likeable but I wonder why when his family is so much worth to him why he doesn´t talk to his sister.Bad points are :- The author makes the MC with quest rewards so OP but then scale the opponent in his level range up so that the MC has to take effort to kill them. He totally forgot what this would mean if other players would to fight against such opponents.- You could forget at minimum one digit in all stats, hp etc.-To often are the stats of the MC postet and the fights mostly are damage report.

Hey Ajing, you're not gonna continue writing anymore?

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It would be perfect if the chapters were more than 3,000 wordsI hope you will not stop writing this novelI just want more and more and more chaptersPlease hurry up and download more chaptersThanks for your hard work

the author has an odd obession with punishing innocents slowly but bad guys quickly if at all (usially not)   also multiple chapters of raped and dead babies  no im not joking   

(Kai)

As the words left his mouth, the book began to scatter pages all around in a cyclone as they enveloped berserker.

"Are you sick?" Zhiyong placed a palm on Shuyang's forehead as he inquired which was only answered with a nod and a glint of sadness.

Even I experience pain every time I was caught

It seems that he had a huge problem with their former supplier. One, the price surge of their former supplier's chocolate became too abnormal.

Ketika mereka berdua telah menjawab perintahku, aku pergi menuju kamar ku untuk mengambil pakaian yang cocok untuk menghadiri jamuan kerajaan. Setelah selesai memilih yang cocok aku pergi dari ruanganku dan menuju keluar akademi menuju istana kerajaan Wortenia.

Tuluyan na siyang nawala sa paningin ko nang lamunin na sila ng dami ng tao. Inayos ko ang cap ko. Naglakad ako ulit at sumunod sa agos ng tao kung saan sila papunta. Sa tingin ko papunta na sila doon sa arena para doon na magtipon-tipon at umpisahan na ang program.