Relic - Reviews

Too messy, after 50 chapters or so, the names, cultivation level, lifespan, etc is so random.

The story is just so good.It just keeps you wanting for more.But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.

Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated

Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into.Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about.Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this.Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more.Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.Sincerely,                     The one and only Doraemon~

overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)

Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.

Well thought out concept and descriptively tailored world background. The novel is interesting and intriguing with a well maintained uniqueness. Good job author!

Around 780 if I remember correctly when I read about spoilers hahaha

This is unfortunate. I enjoy the premise and overall concept of this story. The problem is that this story could be about an MC that has no special power or immortal life and nothing would change. The fact the MC does not age has no bearing on anything in this story. It has never come into effect at all. The only thing it does is let the mc think about how they are safe from time and that's it. Even though he is never in danger of time in the first place. The MC is scared and that's understandable I like a vigilant MC. What I hate though is an MC who has no feelings and has the power to help those around them with little to no effect on them and doesn't. It bothers me a lot. I have read 350+ chapters and the MC  repeatedly does this.

Although the mysterious man Ruen had explained it to him, Enzo hadn't any foundation, so most of Ruen's explanation went over his head. He'd have to figure out how to use the ring himself once he reached the requirements.

Smoke stung my eyes as I moved through the building. The math halls had previously been filled with posters of stuff like fractals that were now charred black. Tears blurred my vision upon seeing the burning victims. Some of them weren't dead but I wish they were. Skin melted off flesh as faces filled with agony were unable to let out screams from their scorched lungs. Nothing is where is should be. Shriveled grapes where there should be eyes. Guts not in the correct location at all and crooked limbs.

"Min? Earth to Jasmin?" Sonia waved her hand in front of Jasmin. Sadly, there was no reaction. She thought of something for a second, clapped her hands as she found an idea. She moved aside, before screaming as loud as she could.