Rejected heart - Reviews

Amaizing author makes amaizing writtings to make audience become amaizing after reading amaizing story from amaizing Nassy Space ............

i really love the story! you did a good job author ?? i am wondering, do you have any social media to keep up with your readers?

I'm confused on how people thinks this book is good. I can see that the story is interesting but the the grammar is all jacked up and hard to understand what exactly is going on at times. This book truly needs to be edited properly and all of the characters seem to be illiterate and just do dumb shi

The story has a few major problems. A lot of name swapping where another name was used that didn't make any sense instead of the actual one. A lot of plotlines were incredibly warped, like he especially takes care that Lone never knows his name his Dave or anything. Give it a few chapters and suddenly she calls him Davey? The grammar was occasionally horrible too. The author needed 400 chapters to realize the infinitive of tired is tire and always wrote tier. So all in all uncomfortable to read but I liked the idea so I kinda read on. I'm done now. The end was unsatisfying in my opinion but what can you do. I don't really recommend it.

Female lead? Well, I'm still gonna try to see whether or not it's cool

It is hard to pace the story and especially decide how long the writers want the story to be. Sometimes the novels end due to the writer such as running out of ideas or burnout of writing the novel for a long time. They also want to make sure they don’t drag out the ending and make it boring towards the end when they put a lot of effort into the story. In the end, we kind of just have to accept the ending for what it is.

The grammar is absolutely bad pwe?but the story is good✌️?

i just found this story and so far, it is a good book. I wonder on the title: you come instead, what is all about?

Very well written! It was a Dark story, full of twists, turns, revenge, forgiveness, and redemption. It was action packed and full of surprises.

love this book! who did you picture while writing the twins and Aurora?