The storyline is quite interesting, although we don't that need the news part so much. The dialogue and the scene is balanced, so far. I mean, it's like 50/50 if I may say. Overall, good. Can't wait for another chapter and cliffhanger ?
Superb... it's been too long since I read this type interesting and a fascinating book.. thanks for the great work author... waiting for the further updates eagerly....
