mc is not smart. Someone with an IQ of 185, acting without thinking about the behaviors. mc mentality is garbage. The author has confused the tag villain with the tag hero. As they say in the other comments, mc IQ is 100. The writer removes the tag villain. The novel annoys you all the time.
Compared to the absolute nuclear trash we have been receiving these past weeks, this one is definitely better. I know that's not much, but at least it isn't a sign in, pet, survival, hint, or dragon series...
Great read, but nobody picks it up for translatig but Ifound this site where they translate from chapter 61, if you like this novel it might interest youhttp://twosisters.rf.gd/
Typical hiding MC's background nonsense. MC let's himself be walked all over. overall super cliche trying to force out revenge and surprise of oh look my husband is rich.
Omo! Good plot you got there. It will draw attention for sure. I thought of reading just one chapter to be able to give a review properly but it hooked me so I read the remaining chapters. Good job , update more.
A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities. It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else. Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
While the story is so far is decent, it's a bit confusing considering the grammar is kind of jumbled up together. Also none of the quotations or spacing are there to separate words from actions and characters talking so that makes it confusing as well.
