Reborn in Konoha; I Think I’m Cultivating Immortality - Reviews

Read if you like pointless face slapping. I was willing to look past an extremely OP system and pointless face slapping, but how many times are you going to repeat the same plot? He has showed off infront of his High-school friends 5 times and it's only been 100 chapters. First he goes to friend's wedding and shows off, 20 chapters later, everyone has already forgotten how rich he is and are again treating him like a pauper. He's been collecting beauties without even touching them, I don't know what kind of Halal Harem he's building and he's already a multi billionaire but we are still reminding that his parents are poor, working people, he's yet to even treat them to lunch, author probably building them for an epic face slapping arc. I'm done with this, he owns the whole city at this point yet no one knows him.

this novel sounds good..................................................................................................................................................................................................

A novel definitely for those who like a decisive bold MC, been a while since I saw one doing such powerful actions. Feel free to check it out. Though I wouldn't read MTL. Attention! The novel's description is a bait.

The story is fun to read. It is rapid paced and constantly moving forward in at least one of the major points of interest. The characters are fun to read and that combined with the rapid pacing of the overall story keeps everything fun and moving forward. However, it blatantly fails at anything approaching realism in an apocalypse, so if that will bug you then you shouldn't be reading it. The worldbuilding overall is below average even for web fiction, and it probably could be most generously described as better than the worst of fanfiction on that front. But yeah... It is a mess.

How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.

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Dunno if I want to start this since it's probably going to get dropped... I'll start if it makes it to 100 chapters.                                                                                                 .

couldn't get past page 2 wishes that weren't worth wishing.

The remaining pictures were either of Bai Luoyin alone, or Bai Luoyin with Bai Hanqi or an elderly couple he assumed were Bai Luoyin's grandparents.

All of Konoha looked up to see the tower of fiery destruction as that initial trap had gone off. Then the dark forest, black at night, lit up with flash after flash of techniques going off over a wide area. Trees began to explode, one every few seconds, lighting the night as brilliant torches.

"…I think so," Esun mumbled, examining the senior adventurers. "Although, I do see three unknown faces about our group and I'm not sure if they are illusions of wonder from Acias or not."

"Death, my dear. It is death." There is something about the icy tone in his voice that is unnerving or maybe its those steely eyes of his looking straight at me, telling my guts that what he's saying is indeed very true.