Reborn in Konoha; I Think I’m Cultivating Immortality

Read if you like pointless face slapping. I was willing to look past an extremely OP system and pointless face slapping, but how many times are you going to repeat the same plot? He has showed off infront of his High-school friends 5 times and it's only been 100 chapters. First he goes to friend's wedding and shows off, 20 chapters later, everyone has already forgotten how rich he is and are again treating him like a pauper. He's been collecting beauties without even touching them, I don't know what kind of Halal Harem he's building and he's already a multi billionaire but we are still reminding that his parents are poor, working people, he's yet to even treat them to lunch, author probably building them for an epic face slapping arc. I'm done with this, he owns the whole city at this point yet no one knows him.

this novel sounds good..................................................................................................................................................................................................

A novel definitely for those who like a decisive bold MC, been a while since I saw one doing such powerful actions. Feel free to check it out. Though I wouldn't read MTL. Attention! The novel's description is a bait.

The story is fun to read. It is rapid paced and constantly moving forward in at least one of the major points of interest. The characters are fun to read and that combined with the rapid pacing of the overall story keeps everything fun and moving forward. However, it blatantly fails at anything approaching realism in an apocalypse, so if that will bug you then you shouldn't be reading it. The worldbuilding overall is below average even for web fiction, and it probably could be most generously described as better than the worst of fanfiction on that front. But yeah... It is a mess.

How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.

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