If you like a soft pleasant romance kind of novel then this is for you! While the choices aren't too ridiculous (still slightly ridiculous), compared to other novels of the same type, the development speed of the MC is slower and more well-placed. It's not too ridiculous such as get this Top 500 company for no reason. I hope it doesn't become like that in the future.The MC is a little dumb, he seems unable to remember properly what happened just 5 years ago. But it's not too bad. Overall he's still pretty good. The romantic interest of the MC is also interesting and not bland, I hope it stays that way. And I hope their relationship is explored rather than just adding new harem members every few chapters. I pray to god this is not another mindless harem book!Overall, a decent novel so far, though not my top pick for this group.
I'll keep it short, the author is either a troll or has nil experience in all the tags on this story. This story is logic-free and every single detail in it is worthy of a bucket of cringe.Mc character: idiotic. Game mechanics: wacky at best. World building: kindergarten-level imagination. Plot: Don't know. My braincells lost weight after reading though. Read at your own risk.I really wanted to like the story but i failed. I wish you good luck in that endeavor!
Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.
I am loving this story that is much better than Martial Gamer, because it doesn't have all the MC stupidity of the official story that is a brain of idiot muscle that only knows how to fight and have ***.While his MC, is intelligent, a good leader and general, and at the same time has noob doubts about some things, but learns quickly.And his flow of history is nice.I hope he continues the good work, and maybe some scenes in the real world? At least when the MC and the archer meet there for real?
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP.And its so good good good good.More chaps.pls.THIS IS GREAT,keep going.!!!!
There are always haters in the comments section, its ur job to swallow it down or just ignore it. But i wouldn’t recommend ignoring. sometimes there will be tips for you how to write better or fix errors in ur story. But never change the story so everyone will like it. You should write a story that u can be proud of, a story that u would love to read.
