First, the writing quality is quite simple which is easy to follow and understand. However, it's kinda lacking in portraying the emotions of the Main character and other characters.Second, the story development is nice with lots of action. For those readers who like reading so much action stuff like playing a video game might like. But for readers who are after the story like watching cutscenes from video games, it's like the excessive fight scenes are being forced on us.Third, the Main character design is well done with a mysterious background for the MC. wish so was done for the support and some side characters too.Fourth, Updating is super slow.Fifth, the world background the author did for this the story is something I have never read before. I applaud to that.Overall, this book holds so much potential for improvement and to become a big story. Good luck.