Rebirth : Naruto's World [SYSTEM] - Reviews

long time no update..is this book abandon??

Just awful.  It started as you would expect a novel with this title to, but not only are the 10 days incredibly drawn out with chapter 25 being early day 4 but the MC has already become a twisted narcissistic delusional arrogant psychopath by then.  Who knows how much worse he'll become in the following 6 days? He's already provoking people and then holding grudges against them when they respond in the simulations.

What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out.

Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,!Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .

"This is a very nice one. The horror elements are on point in my opinion. I read it at night alone and I didn't dare go to the bathroom for another hour or two before I couldn't hold it in.""It gets me shiveri-" (????? ???????? ??????)". . .wait what was that? " (???????)"Ah, I'm just hearing things. Scared me fo-" (????? ?????)". . . Who's there!? "(????? ????? ?????)'?? ?? ?? ??, ??'? ??????! ??'? ??????!???? 911 ???? 911 . . . ?? ?? ?? ? ???? ?? ?????? ?? ????????? ???'"HELP ME! HELP ME! PLEASE-SOMEONE"(????? ????? ?????? ????? ??????)'???? ?? ???? ??, ???? ?? ??? ????, ?????? ??????' - "??? ??????? ????? ??? ?? ????????? ??? ?? ? ????????? ??????? ?????. ?????? ??? ????? ?????""I'm dead, I'm dead, I can't contact anyone"(????)"Wait . . .the thumping is gone, I'm saf-" '?? ??'. . .???????

After reading this novel, strangely I felt like I wanted to be sent in a world were I'll be fore to work hard to try and survive. So, that my slothful nature would vanished for my greater good.

First of all I really love the synopsis, I really do since every time I would read a story I always look at the synopsis since I believe that the synopsis defines the inside of my book and you will know if it will be pretty interesting or nah. So kudos to you for making an interesting synopsis. Next, the title chapters are pretty interesting too, makes you excited to read the next ones.  The flow of your story is great, the world building is pretty interesting and amazing. Keep writing!

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Author trying to give everyone carpal tunnel!!! Seriously the Storyline is growing well and all the characters are blending beautifully!

Your work is really wonderful,but update some of them sometimes.Just wanna say this cauz people might get irritated or mad because of long time waiting"this is only my opinion pls keep in mind

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