Real Magic - Reviews

Beautiful story line.  Amazing cover.

I see "kingdom building" TAG and  I will support the book

synopsis looks great and first two chapters are in nice development, hope it continues with good development as there are many stories that gone bad because authors had made stories bot readable. hope you won't do like that and give us a good novel

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this story is great do far chapter 25 of actually story but in my opinion is that it would be awesome if us the fans drew some of the evolutions based on the descriptions so all you who are good at art consider this please.

The story draws you in at the first part, and immidately when it starts, potential is seen in this book.                                          

Grammar can be a bit better and the world building can be slowly expanded.There is potential and this novel is pretty good.What is the end goal for this novel? Is it similar to My Father in Law is Lu Bu?

     "Yak! aku sedang bicara denganmu!" tegur Shindong karena Sehun tak kunjung menjawab pertanyaannya. Ya, ternyata sedari tadi Sehun termenung dengan pikirannya yang entah kemana.

The sergeant was at their house that evening. He was talking to Rita in the kitchen. The conversation ended when Kit came in. She looked from one to the other. "Is there any news?"

Suddenly from within the hole in his chest, a thick golden chain flew out as it radiated a holy light.

Her body was rolling, tumbling down, and hitting the ground so hard. She tried to stop herself however the slope was inclineded to much resulting for her fail. So she just let herself to roll.

While thinking, I try to remember what happened before I fell unconscious. The last thing I remember was when I was trying to find a place to rest, I stepped on some kind of a magic circle I guess? And after that... after that....  Aaah screw it, I can't remember anything else after that.