This story was a fun read until Leonel never followed through with his ideas or goals. I waited for him to upgrade his brother's abilities with Black Star until they enterd a realm where it became pointless. I waited for him to revive anyone in the silver tablet until it became to late. I waited for him to use the womb and Gold Fish until his realm was to high for it to matter. I waited for Black Star to grow into a decent character. I waited for Lionel to share dimensional cleanse with Aina or his brothers but he never doas. I waited for Aina to help point out areas where his brothers could focus on to improve but nothing. I waited on him to help his brothers but he just does the bar minimum for them to improve. this Story is just Leonel jumping from crisis to crisis and him thinking he'll help but then he never followes through.
As of now I think this novel could reach far. The way his cheat works is interesting and at the same time not easy to trigger. ( In the sense that he needs to work hard for it) There are limitations to it and could make future plots interesting as long as the author isn't dumb. In total I'd say it's worth a read and should be picked this week.
Just have to say that this book has definitive world building, solid back story, and an actually relatable character. not just some MC who always wins. It's a slow start. But it gets going fast. 10/10
Hello there....It's time for another REVIEW!!!!!!1-Starts off slow and steady2-Grammar very good3-Amazing Characters4-Character Development is extremely well done5-Overall it's a well done novelGOOD JOB AUTHOR
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the story idea is pretty good, but why can't I see much difference from the original novel ?? I even thought that this was just a copy paste of the original novel because only Mc's name changed