Re: Naruto. - Reviews

Love how the simulations are executed. There aren't much awkwardness during each one or when he gets out of the simulations. Everything flows naturally like nothing special happened, which is quite nice. The MC is also smart and doesn't do unnecessary things like face slapping, which is very prevalent in many different novels. Strongly recommended to read this story.

It is my firm belief that this sucks. There's recently been this trend of I have thousand/hundred times talent/rewards/enhancements etc. and I just hope that it stops.That's all.

I'm not usually in to video game stories, but this might just change my mind! Great and world building, an interesting plot and smooth writing. I enjoyed what I've read quite a lot. Good job, author! (:

Id like to start off by saying that the concept behind the novel has alot of potential, four races create a vr mmorpg where participation is somewhat mandatory after a certain age and most conflicts are settled in game rather than real life. However none of the important parts of the novel are explained such as why his parents dont help him out when hes just starting out or play with him at all and why his school is so loose with rules/regulations regarding the game when they dont teach anything else, how he manages to find a legacy item somewhere that hundreds if not thousands of people visit regularly for years, the small amount of classes even though the game has been running for hundreds of years, the company/ people behind the game i dont think was mentioned and they have not become a huge super power even though they built something so important, why three women who are 7-9 years older than him fall in love ludicrously fast, why he gains a huge amount of money but hides it for fear of the government coming after him instead of using it for his family, why a 16 year old kid doesnt act like one when hes had a relatively normal upbringing and doesnt have any actual issues and one the author claims to be shy and introverted doesnt behave that way half the time, why the MC has actually no friends not even close acquaintances even though he has lived for 16 years, why people treat NPC’s like dirt even though being courteous at least leads to more opportunities and quests even after hundreds of years of the game being around, how the MC seems stronger than average characters even though he hasnt put any points into stats (before he gets his wolf partner), why the “CLASS” quest that he gets requires him to run all over the game world before getting ANY ability or even the class name, the authors fetish with black cloaks and the way he introduces them, why does the MC need to keep everything a secret when the major powers offered him benefits in exchange and the did so somewhat respectfully instead of chasing him down and killing him to level one, why he bought a mask if he doesnt take off the cloak around people except his harem and NPC’s.I have a lot more things i could add but i already passed 2k characters so ill end it there, but please get an editor and translator, everytime i read a novel like this i cant help but feel it would be at least 2x as good in the native language of the author and a “rough” translation to english brings the story down.

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Godly book… World background: it’s on earthCharacter design: cautious then turns low key and cautious then gets more  daring.Story development: idk how you did it but you managed to basically perfectly mix real life and fantasy…Stability of updates: 8 months and over 260 chapters… with no premium…Writing quality: it’s not bad, as in I have seen better and I have seen worse

Great novel. Who knew that the mc would start cultivating due to a light novel? This is a different take on how cultivation would start, I'm definitely hooked on it!

Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3

Truly a masterpiece. It is written very well and the story building is also very good. The soul cultivation of this novel is unique, but not that much (i think). I've read all the chapters updated till this date, and I must say, I loved it.I don't know about others, but for me, it's definitely a must read.

"Yes, Lola.  I will inform the others."  He stood up and hurried back to the others, anxious to get away from her.

Both An Zihao and Xiao Yu dashed towards the masked man, covering a distance of about 15 m in an instant.

I could not reply to her words I just moved towards the side of the path she was heading towards the forest so I just followed her silently. Maybe I should try to talk to her *Nah* she's a loner she will never talk to another loner like me.