Rain Of Lolis - Reviews

This is very unique and has a lot of potential, I hope he doesnt ruin his superpower by just chasing girls all the time.??????????

Well this will probably turn out to be a good novel. But I will drop it since I do not like the MC since he is kinda evil which was portrayed in a funny way to make people laugh. In any case this novel is funny and you can give it try.

Read this on scribblehub, titled as Unfathomable Senior. The MC is none at all "unfathomable" and only relates to the title ever so often when the author decides to mention that the surrounding pedestrians are so shocked every 10 chapters. The main storyline doesn't actually begin until chapter 30-40 when he finally decides to leave the beginner village to look for his family. So if you don't like 30 chapters of filler and repetitive plot, don't read this.

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up till now is good lets wait for more updates

An amazing and intrigueing start for a novel. Keep going, can't wait for more updates.

'This is bad.'

She shuddered at the thought of him getting tortured for hours not to mention for straight 3 weeks, But she couldn't let it get into her head...They are soldiers they are here because they chose to be here...Even if it means dying or getting torture for your village

  Gangster OG:  "Tcht, don't matter who or what it is, Black Cloak rears it's head round' me, I'll tear em' up real good."

Good question Dylan; but the perspective sends shivers down my spine. Too easy, too good to be true.

BUT!

Then he started saying,