Ra khỏi núi - Reviews

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Recently started reading this and up to chapter 50. Fantastic storyline with very well-developed characters that I eagerly look forward to learning more about as they progress. Great mix of adventure, game play, and humor. Keep ‘em coming - Can’t wait to see what happens next.

This a new kind of a good novel description and hope the same goes for the novel:dialogue:From the future daughter :  Hi daddy I am your daughter from the futureThe father: I am rich in the futureFrom the future daughter : Mom is rich but you're a house keeperThe father: The number you have dialed cannot work

The idea is good, but even the first few chapters the word count stretching is really dramatic . I wish someone would write a better version of this.

Nothing much going on besides the MC visiting various places. The issue is the English which makes it not a smooth read. Trying to understand things by reading over and over is no fun.

Best recommendation!  I love all the language and plot in this story.  Enjoyed it well and was completely blown away!Good job author????????

I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent.   it has the feel of direct translation with no polish.   so. writer do not give up on this.  I look forward to read more.

Nevertheless, I have not suffered a loss!

"martial spirit metal tiger of middle grade" the mayor said as he take out a sphere and place in front of James " James put your hand above the sphere to test your spirit qi"