Proteyyn - Reviews

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I thought it was good but I would like to see there be a dog or some sort of animal so it would be Intriguing to some readers????????

your story is something, I like to read to be honest, I would like to see how far it will grow.so far there not else to talk about for now until futher more chapter's have been read.

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Making a split-second decision, I began climbing the mountain.

im gonna try to write a bit later today and see where that goes like i said in the author notes though my imagination is a cruel bit*h

It seems that my body is still getting an increase to my stats but there is something that is bugging me. "Hey Sarah, I was wondering why I don't have some stats like agility and endurance or something to tell me how fast I am and how long I can last before getting tired." A few second go by and Sarah responds, "You have more stats then you see here but since they are currently at zero I thought it would save space in you stat table to hide them until you activate them." I respond, "That sounds reasonable but how do I get them if I can't see them to know what to train.

"Life-time permit? What do you mean by that?" I asked.

In a fierce mental struggle not to do so even when not wanted. Sigh very tired and perhaps as depressed as Genda, finally he is sitting in the swivel desk chair. A minute later Takato was already his forehead, without the company of his boss and standing in front of his desk a bit far.

Richmond: You gonna meet me at David Busters next week on Saturday for my birthday party?

Just for the fp, story plot is good but grammar is not ?