Primordial Remnants - Reviews

I will not read this novel since MC isn't solo. But I like how author describe the synopsis mentioning that it deosn't have Solo MC. good luck

Chapter 10 Status:Writing Quality: ⭐️ MTLStability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ One chapter a day or soStory Development: ⭐️⭐️ I am to lazy to write, but it=s worse than those novels in Trial readsCharacter Design: ⭐️⭐️ Bland, one dimensional characters with 0 depth or personalityWorld Background: ⭐️⭐️ Only a little is explained at the start, but it‘s incomplete, disorganized and useless for the most part

This is a warning. While the book was good and I enjoyed it, the author had personal reasons come up and the story gets cut short. Not everything gets resolved

Ooof, yeah no. The story seems like a good one but because of the misused tenses and bad punctuation and grammar just makes this a bit hard to read.

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wow ,the beginning is already so hooking ? great job author ?

Smart and well thought out although the pacing can be a bit slow in places but it adds to the world building it’s not your over the top protagonist growing unstoppable and immortal in a day kind of novel

This has been your author Carlos, take care all you guys and gals...and that coloful rainbow in between!!!!

"Excellent. I will give you this bow in exchange for my entertainment."

"Kau sudah mengetahui itu?"

"Naisha dear, ah it's been awhile you have visited this old man, you don't look so good, dear. Are you okay?"

"Yes, I noticed it this morning when this nightmare Asia spoke about was brought up this morning. He has been having this distant look in his eyes every now"