Primer Dragón Demoníaco - Reviews

what are these reviewers on? the translation is not bad at all. Anyway, the story is pretty good in the first 20 chapters.                                

I am looking for the next chapters! Very easy going and smooth way of writting, it drowns you in. I’m in love with the author’s style haha. Hope people appreciate it

Well as proofreader and editor least to say I´m pro novel xDBut as reader myself I think the story has grat potential, it´s the authors first novel so well things always start from somewhere and I think with time will only get better. As for now well MC is still a child, and as we all now which child hasn´t thrown a tantrum or behaves like a little shithead ^^I love the way the MC is and I can´t w8 how he will develop growing up .....like maybe fall in love, making friends, loosing familymember, remember past, getting knowled about his real human parents , etc.....so let´s ride the bus and hope for a good journey :D! Author-san keep up the creative work, don´t go dying on me because of exhaustion :P

New translator? The previous translator is mistycloud ?. Same translator with a novel genius doctor black belly miss. I’ve been waiting to continue to read this novel so long. I hope the translator will give mass release chapters, but 9 chapters????? I’ve read more hundreds chapters. Till when I can wait to continue to read the story?

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"Ara..." Kushina then felt the muscle on her left shoulder clenched slightly "I really slacked off, didn't I?" She asked herself but actually didn't pay much attention to it, she was sure that with her son help she would get back to shape in no time.

"Great," Naruto smiled brightly, two new girls for him to screw senseless, not to mention these two just lost their virginity today.

The everlasting sky roared like an angry dragon as the river Hadeon dried up and became a dry land covered with tens of hundreds of eggs, demon eggs to be exact. In the midst of the ear-deafening sound, an egg cracked open and in it was a snake-like creature sporting two small horns on its head.

"Well, your fall on the treadmill probably didn't help your cause," I pointed out.

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