Prehistoric Barbarian - Reviews

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I recommend passing on this one unless you want to read yet another racist author’s work. It doesn’t happen in the first 40 chapters, but I’ve read the MTL and it happens later in the story when the MC goes to a higher realm and is talking to one of the officials in that realm of the likelihood of being able to marry even a maid in the realm. The official tries to explain it with a hypothetical — “If you had a daughter who wanted to marry a Black man, you wouldn’t like that, right?” And MC goes, “I’d break some legs if I had a daughter that dared to marry a Black man.” Ugh.

I have to be honest I am completely weirded out by the novel. You know Twilight right ? That werewolf guy Jacob that saw Bella pregnant with the vampire Edward's child. Smelled her daughter somehow in her belly and decided to raise her kid before getting romantically involve with her ? That is how I felt reading this.I have read up to chapter 23 and towards the end I could not continue anymore because of how uncomfortable I felt, exact same feeling. Like right that moment MC is two days old and the girl has fallen in complete love with MC both body and mind. I know it's not technically pedo since they are both kids but MC is still a baby. The elders knows, the grandmother of the girl also see through it and thinks it's ok.Like look, I know the title of the novel and it was because of it I was thinking to myself I will finally be happy to be able to find a novel without romance however not only did I not get what I wished for but I can already imagine reading the next chapters about a little girl grooming MC to marry him later and this is as bad as what Twilight had made me feel.Translation quality 5Story development 2 (Very slow)Character design 1 (Too 1 dimensional)World background 5 (Takes from other novel, no creativity but ok not bad I guess)

I just came across this book when I was looking at the originals. So far I like the story. The main character seems to be a little arrogant but since its been a only two chapters I cannot be 100% sure. As for the girl don't know if she is the main heroine yet. Will stay updated on this.

Is this a fanfic? Why are all the chapters locked?. ............................................

I really loved the world building part and how the characters are introduced. Very engaging in terms of how the plot moves ahead. I am really enjoying this read. Best wishes to the author and keep going on your writing path!

It’s seems an intriguing  story. The prelude is well developed and I was curious for read more.

Leo: How did he know my name? How can he be in two places at once? isn't this the after life? Why do I feel familiarity with this man? I have got to admit, he is handsome, no wonder he could claim such a beauty. But why his he talking to me now? All these questions kept racing through Leo's mind. Seeing the man move closer to him, he finally replied. I am sorry sir, i didn't mean to intrude.

Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert]This novel is different from the most.. Instead of MC dying on Earth and reincarnated in the magical world, this novel does the opposite.. MC is born in a magical world as strongest Mage and reincarnated on earth without any mana, just pure normal earth.. In previous life, MC is betrayed by the young king because MC, who has become old and just wants a retirement life with his family.. Plus, he and the old king are close, and MC also has done so much for the kingdom.. But as the young king inherited the Throne, the king himself quite corrupted unlike his father (previous king).. After the young king offered many gifts, one after another, to avoid MC retired, MC is firm with his decision, causing the king poisoning MC..As MC reincarnated as a normal human on normal Earth, MC lived a life of normal people for 17 years UNTIL one day, the gate appeared, and the monster poured out from the gate.. As a result, MC and his family got attacked by the monster and got an offered by Evil System.. MC rejected the offered by Evil System, causing him to become an unawakened person.. Of course, some people in the world are awakened, and some are not.. But after two years, MC became the strongest swordsman among unawakened people.. Not sure how a person "use-to-be strongest mage" becomes the strongest swordsman (excluded awakened person).. Due to that, his guildmate feels more burdened as MC, who unawakened person, can get many achievements while they who awakened barely achieve anything.. This has caused MC to be betrayed by his own captain.. MC held tightly at the end of the cliff after being pushed by his own captain, and can see his end.. Then, after he fell from the cliff, he survived and awakened a new system, which I thought it going to be an overpowered system, but it was not.. MC got betrayed and died on previous life, and he almost died by betrayal AGAIN on this life? Will he ever learn from this? Then, when he finally awakened, MC got nerf right away with "crack soul"? And he can only get information about his crippleness after he becomes SSS-ranker??Not only that, after he survived the fell, he went back to the guild and didn't kill or cripple the person who tried to kill him? Yup.. this novel is not for me.. I was expecting an OP MC, but this novel doesn't have one.. No wonder this novel going into Hiatus.. I wish the author good luck..

I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no grave mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story.It’s kinda sweet and I took a liking in Max, you can say it’s a well written character.

It was then that an old man found it and took it to his house. He put it in a small wooden cage and fed it.

The Commander was awestruck by fear and could not think properly. In his insanity he ran over to the nearby cliff and jumped off in a desperate attempt...