Pokemon ( New Journey) - Reviews

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Author! How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?

A very well written story that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. The character design and world building are top notch, which, alongside the excellent story development make for a extremely entertaining novel. (Fair warning that this novel whilst based in the Star Wars universe is not written canonically.)♠️?

Nice but update on the story ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

OK review time. The story was unintresting, not enough use of the system, took to long to get to the system benifets, too much slice of life. Good translation, story seems to be set in modern china with hints of a wider future universe (barley), character is generic orphan college boy with no gusto, overall not recommended for translation and not worth your time reading.

This novel is fast a fk boi ....Still fast as fk booooi ...I don't think you have any idea how fast this novel is ...IT'S FAST AS FK BOOOI

I. simply. like. charm. based. powers. because. they. are. always. looked. down. upon.this is stupid considering that almost all so called "extremely calm and reasonable" protagonist will bend over backwards just for a random pretty girl.if it has the power to compel an army of protagonists to surrender what more do you need?

I like the story so far, it gives me SAO vibes. The only complaint I have for the story so far is in my opinion is a lack of buildup to the imprisionment in the game, But other then that, reading so far is very enjoyable and I would love to see more! ??????

I still can't understand why you decided to rewrite this story and change it when the other version was good but okay, well this is pretty good but not my liking.

Okey

"Nothing at all."

Bhumi looked at Dev first, and then to her daughter, and thought to herself, "I will take life as it comes, and won't expect anything from anyone anymore. Ashi is enough for me and I will spend the whole life for her only."