The MC had some off-putting characteristics specifically at the beginning which later improved. But after that the translation quality dropped. The pronouns used were mismatched to the characters. Good thing it stopped there.All in all its a good read, just don't read it along with other cultivation theme novels bcuz its clichés element will be very obvious.
It legitimately is borderline peak web novel, with human characteristics, young masters have brains, MC grows and gets smarter at a proper rate and the weak to strong aspect is done perfectly. The plot/plot twists are great and the development is perfect.
All though the story is not that long as of now I believe it has potential. I am enjoying reading it significantly more than I believed I would. There are occasional spelling errors but that is to be expected and can be easily ignored. Additionally there is a slow addition of chapters which I can understand since people have their lives they need to attend to. Overall very enjoyable read and I am looking forward to reading more.
He saw a white silhouette in front of him. The instant he looked at it, coupled with the voice he previously heard, Ryker knew right away who it was even though the silhouette had no features.
Eiji frowned. What about him made these men believe he could or would be able to achieve an impossible? Weren't they awfully trusting? He wasn't sure what to feel about this kind of respect.
