Perverted Luffy and your Harem (R-18) - Reviews

Perverted Luffy and your Harem (R-18)
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Hi, and welcome to my novel :)I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :DThe age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical. I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend.If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP.Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it.Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review.P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
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I feel like the mc is getting green hatted every moment of the story, I also dislike how the taint breaks the mind of a women as it's a bit too dark for me, The mc and pretty much any female character gets raped or is close to getting raped almost constantly, It is to the point that when you see a new female character you begin to wonder whether she will be raped and then die, Simply raped and broken, Or just die, It gets kinda repetitive, Also it has only been a few days in hundreds of chapters yet it feels like they have gone through months of action, There is too much happening in too few days.
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"Sure. Thanks." He smiled and the atmosphere around us grew awkward again.
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I Believe becoming a NOTHING BOX !!
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im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome im handsome
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(Can prevent their fate of death avoiding fatal blows most of the time And also user is very lucky)
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And all that glitters is gold
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Even when the East excited me most, even when I was most keenly aware of its superiority to the bored, sprawling, swollen towns beyond the Ohio, with their interminable inquisitions which spared only the children and the very old--even then it had always for me a quality of distortion. West Egg especially still figures in my more fantastic dreams. I see it as a night scene by El Greco: a hundred houses, at once conventional and grotesque, crouching under a sullen, overhanging sky and a lustreless moon. In the foreground four solemn men in dress suits are walking along the sidewalk with a stretcher on which lies a drunken woman in a white evening dress. Her hand, which dangles over the side, sparkles cold with jewels. Gravely the men turn in at a house--the wrong house. But no one knows the woman's name, and no one cares.
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Another story
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I am new , and here is my first novel please support me guys ??
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