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Author here! My review score accurately reflects my feeling on my story. If you like deep world building, strong character designs, clear character growth, and a completely flushed out plot you have come to the right story.The proof I can give you is the first two chapters are the ending point for volume 1. With a clear end point in place all that there is to do is fill in the blanks. I will also be frank. My grammar and spelling can be rough. I hope you will look past it and try to just enjoy the story.The book may start out slow but it will pick up in pace later on. There is a lot of background to build and a lot of moving pieces to generate and tie together.The story will continue forward to get to the tournament as I release chapters. However, there will also be plenty of flashbacks / cut scenes to flush out the story arcs dealing with James's parents, the lab, and the organization known as Black Death. I am a fan of video games and mysteries and I want to tie the two genres together in one place. Please be patient and enjoy my story. The chapter word count I am targeting is between 1,500 at the lowest to 3,500 at the highest. Ideally it will be closer to 2,000 words per chapter. The only reasons why a chapter's length would be around the 1,500 count is if I have to split a super long chapter in half or I get too busy on the weekend.I look forward to your input and comments!
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HI LOVELY AUTHORRR! Firstly, I can't help but mention it's easier on the readers eyes if the paragraphs are smaller. Secondly, the different dialects of the characters have been maintained wonderfully oof! Lasty, it was never a cup of my tea, (this genre) however i find myself intrigued to stay on track with this amazingly scripted piece. The time i have in my hands doesnt do justice as i reallly wanna read more hehe. WELL DONE
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Before he can stop the FBI agent the bullet has already left the rifle and is on its deadly path. Following the trajectory of the bullet, Conan can see the hooded figure on the boat suddenly collapse. A moment of silence sets in.
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"I can see my friend over there doesn't wish to spend the rest of the night giving a detailed report to the guards about this incident and would rather be home. Perhaps if we could cut our shopping short and head home sooner?"
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"Two-Edged Spear I swear to everything holy in the realms, why are you in here again?" Realm Night doesn't bother trying to hide the exasperation leaking through every letter and space in his words as he threw a throwing knife he conjured out of nowhere, "I thought I sealed[1] my door, with multiple seals even. Just because you're the guild master and can have relatively easy access to any member's rooms doesn't mean you can relax and do your thing in mine."
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"So?" Poppy said, folding her excited hands behind her back. "Did I hear right?"
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     "I do." Gerig replied as he took the letter from Taran. Upon opening it very carefully, Gerig began to read the message out loud to whoever could understand what he was saying:

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