Outcast BTS Fanfic - Reviews

I really want to like this novel, I really do. The author however spends a large chunk of chapters explaining things instead of letting the story play out so the chapter payoff feels much to be desired. While there are a ton of chapters the story takes forever to unravel.

Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.

I’m really hyped up for the journey Ling Feng is gonna embark in, lets hope he gets to level up even more and gets to understand the secrets of the world and dao better

harem dont waste your time...I had no problem with the overall development until this: "Enemy of women? I'm the savior of all men and beautiful women, the nightmare for all ugly freaks and transvestites. I'll make sure that they wouldn't dare to come out and scare others!" ???????like, what the actual fuck bro, nah

A good bookGood storiesAnd I enjoy it very muchPeople should read itCuz this goodAnd suchAnd I really like short stories with a good action thingy than romance

An Amazing novel, returning back in time has always been one of my favourite tags and this novel perfectly shows that, I just hope that the author could write more words in his chapters. Overall I think the book has a lot of potential and I hope the author continues with it.

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The Story is Rushed,this is feel like some sort of Story Log.and motherfuc-ker Webnovel is reducing The chapter again.....???????????????????????????????????????????

This book is very poorly written and inconsistent. The author changes things from sentence to sentence and none of the math makes sense.  The author makes claims about reality that are impossible. I can no longer continue reading after chapter 7 because it is so poorly written.

An entertaining story that surprises. The characters feel sympathetic and the writing quality itself is quite good. I sincerely enjoyed this story far more than I initially imagined I would.Minor grammar mistakes, but these are neglectable as they seldom intervene with the flow of the story.A job well done.

You're book is literal trash. Plain and simple. Maybe if you read your chapter comments and took some advice it would be much better, but sadly, it's clear you don't and it shows. Does the book have the potential to be a gem? Yes, but you've ruined it. If it was only a couple mistakes and grammar errors then whatever... but sadly... every chapter makes me want throw my phone. Dozens of plot development mistakes every single chapter.

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