Otome na Ouji to Majuu Kishi - Reviews

Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less.Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.

The story is good and has a lot of potential, however there are some very obvious plot holes which could have been seen if someone were to read over it

The work is not bad but unfortunately the author seems very simple, he seems a bit more of an extremist Chinese, all the chapters name China, and all the good events are focused on China, you should read a bit to realize it.The truth is, I liked giving it a better score, but it frustrated me so much and the author has ruined the work so much with his nationalism, so it can't be enjoyed.

Why does this have more votes than infinite skill points??????????????????????????????????????????????

too bad the author is dead. I hope not tho, this story is actually good. pray for author. Fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

He didn't know what came over him, but he had a sudden urge to stop and take a look at the falling cherry blossoms. He was obsessed with them these past few weeks. He was not a sweet man, so he rarely gave gifts to Nian Zhen, the fiancée that his parents chose for him. He also didn't take her out on a date, despite his mother's constant pestering.

Seemingly unaffected, Haru adopted a perfect posture of fencing by moving his left hand behind his back while placing the blade of his rapier vertically and symmetrically in front of his face.  

As another young couple leaves, I ready myself. An elderly couple starts feeding each other.

"And to you Jun Brother!"

"Shhh

Adam tak membalas, mematikan telpon itu sepihak. Merasa risih mendengar jeritan euporia wanita yang sangat haus akan ke ahlian adam. See... Setiap wanita di luar sana begitu mendambakan sosok Adam, rela mengemis hanya untuk dapat berakhir di atas ranjang bersamanya. Lihat wanita yang satu ini, yang tengah tertidur seperti bayi. Dia rela menyayat nadinya sendiri untuk mengakhiri hidupnya hanya karena tidur dengan sosok seorang adam. Menatap sinis kepada Jade yang masih tertidur pulas. "Ini salah mu... Tunggu hukuman mu! Berlalu meninggalkan kamar itu dengan aura yang tak terbaca. "Brak!

My world's on fire, how about yours?