Origin of last champion - Reviews

The story actually about Rina and Ace or project alpha? I get bored to read it already

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So far this books is of amazing quality. it's  interesting and unique in a way, while keeping your attention with every passing chapter. overall it is one of the few books worth a second read or maybe even a third when it gets higher in chapters which is it's only weak point, the update schedule is a little slow. This is of course counteracted by the great chapters with great length, but overall its current read time is less than 2 hours. still good one, author 10/10

Don't waste your time on this. Other than translation everything else is   trash, mc is narrow minded and two faced. It feels like the one wrote this story is living in cave, very boring and one dimensional.

Really interesting concept and the writing is done well, I dont understand why it doesnt receive as much attention as it should, probably because it still has very little chapter! Keep it up man :)

Hmmmm, One of my friends has written a good story, a tale of a man with a beast trapped inside of him, I can understand. The exploration of his development seems to be the main focus of the story.Good job Swan

The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no

"He's too strong!!"

"Well then Eli until we meet again."

When Oriele regained her consciousness, she tried looking around, hoping what had happened before was a dream. It wasn't. Noticing she was awake, one of the things stood up and suddenly cut her left foot off. Oriele screamed in pain, tears forming in her eyes. Their smiles got bigger, revealing their gleaming teeth. It was almost time for their next meal.

Four-Dimensional Building Extensional Blocks, a mini-house with extra blocks lying around. It is capable of creating extra space, or 'rooms,' inside a given building. Externally, the place would look like just any room but inside, the room could be the size of a football field!

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