I read both stories by Mr. Shah and I enjoyed both immensely. The only thing I have issue with is that even though I know English was not the original language of the author he could have had someone to help proofread his work. I am not an English Major nor did I graduate college but there were so many words that had additional constants and words that I had to decipher before I figured out what the author was leading to. Again, I am not trying to sound disrespectful and I again state that I enjoyed the story. Best blessing, Namaste ?
