One World Ends, Another Begins (working title) - Reviews

A very catchy and original cover page. I like your idea for the story.The plot is interesting, your characters are expressive. You're doing well!

It maybe good novel, I’m not sure bc I feel this novel is copy and paste it from mtl.                                                      

This story was written in an anime-style format. I could easily visualize each scenes in my head. It is nice to feel like watching an anime while reading it.Although each chapter was short, they were straightforward and surprisingly impactful.

I’m looking for a good spartan fanfic so I’ll leave a comment in hopes you continue this story. Take my 5 stars also

Jennie removed his hand. We looked at her.

dude the power system is so good also my man's narration improved after "the incident"

2nd chapter is also amazing I wonder what's next

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yep, time for review. Fast paced story, good plot,  pretty good story development. I'll invest in this novel for 5 star ❤❤❤

Its alright. Don't mind reading it everyday