While reading the first chapter, I perceived the MC as a mischievous spoilt brat, but as I read on, I realized he’s actually sensible and mature for his age which is understandable due to his background.The story progresses quickly, and I was caught off guard by the sudden shift from the third-person narrative to first-person narrative in chapter 4, but I guess that works as well. Overall, the story is very good, and would have readers like me invested in it. Good job, author ?
