Overall, good story. A few flaws, though.
Most obvious one, MC doesn't one is on himself enough. He actually let's other people get equipment he can use. He really needed to be more selfish imo.
Yan Er was extremely annoying an hateable, I really do think the story would have been better of without her.
Ending was extremely rushed, but the story was repetitive, so I can't say much to the author deciding to end it early.
The game stats are fucked to hell. You want me to believe the MC is killing a mutli hundred billion hp boss, when his weapon has a like 400k atk on it and 3.8 second attack speed? Also, one small thing on the author's math, how does 200k + 200% = 2 million?? I'm so confused, I understand he has a whole bunch of buffs on him, and strength, but it's stated some buffs don't multiply together, so the author's math is just ridiculous.
