Obsessed Slaves! - Reviews

I read the first 4 chapters and It was a great read. The world background is great till now. The pacing is excellent and I like that it is written in the first perspective POV. But as the main character is not properly described, so I cannot get an image of him in my mind. Would help if you write a little to describe him. But other than this, I liked everything and would recommend people to read it.

Here is my version of a teaser/summary of this novel.Lin Fan is a struggling graduate in Shanghai til the day he got his hands on huge book filled with blank pages. Now he has got an almight encyclopedia in his head that allows him to make the most addictive heavenly scallion pancakes and the ultimate fortune telling skills but this is just a tip of the iceberg. Read on and accompany him as he struggles to get enough points to unveil chapters, meet new friends, smack some bragging belittling people's faces and raise to the top.

Can someone tell me what is going on here. People keep rating this story down, yet it has more than 400 votes making it next up. Are some people hyping or faking the vote. I don't want to deliberately down vote the novel but there seem to be something going on

Nice novel!! I don't know why the hate on the translation quality. I think it is pretty good.Keep it up Novel saga don't bother with these bad reviews and pls increase the chapter releases per week . Thanks

i highly enjoyed reading this novel, didnt find anything that made me feel troubled. shame it was not continued since months.and shame i had to write this sentence just so i had enough letters to post that review.

i like harems!, too many haters of harems Even so I like novels without harem, I like novels in general if you take the plot well (not that kind of plot that you are thinking XD)Anyway author writes what you like and I WILL ENJOY IT IF I LIKE THANKS!........

tbh i still havent read the story .i was just drawn by the thick thighs ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................

I will get to each reason why and will update frequently maybe every fifty chapters 1:Writing quality- most is great writing quality the only issue is the lack of description and depth to the world and story which correlates to two other, there is also the fact that it doesn’t explain a lot about time, so it gets confusing, that’s why it got a three2:Updating Stability- pretty standard not to the point where I can read a new chapter everyday but I can understand so I still gave it a 4 star3:Story Developement- the story goes fast paced which doesn’t allow me personally to get a sense of depth with the characters and it kind of goes too fast with the affinities and gaining of abilities, that’s why I gave it a 3 star4:Character design- we don’t really don’t get any defining features of the character like body build background or history so it makes it hard to envision it which is why it got a 2 star5:World Background- we don’t get a lot of explanation about the world and what it looks like and we have no history of anything like families of the characters or anything like that so in my opinion that’ s why I gave it a 2 starI thank you for reading my review and don’t let it keep you from reading the story because the concept is great this is only here for the author to better his book, have a great day this will be updated when we reach 50 chapters so look forward to it

Five out of five Good great and the best

A well done story better than many stories here on webnovel deserving more popularity. There are times that story seems like a high school drama, but I didn't mind it. Given their age, amnesia, and discovery of a new world puts a lot of pressure on the characters. You can feel the emotion and struggles of the characters as they fight to save a planet. All this happens in less than 1 month. The were always constant questions and mysteries the characters face that they slowly get unraveled over time.There are some grammatical errors but very little and do little to take away from the story. I felt fights were a weaker apart of the story along with the villains. After 800 years, they felt lax and not strong overall probably from arrogance? When facing multiple dark mages it felt like a 1v1 dueling style. The alpha felt like the weakest ones maybe due to not being able to control her powers?Overall, good story that deserves it's rating.

It's a well-written novel with a lot of thought put into each chapters. The world setting was laid out perfectly. The only thing that's not sitting with me in my opinion is how the MC behaved. I like it when he started to get confident with himself after getting a power boost. Also his personal background was nicely explained. The aspect of growing and sympathizing with the character grows with us readers, however once he developed this new power, he rather becomes impulsive with his decisions and personality fluctuates a lot which left me frowning at times. I have enjoyed reading this novel otherwise and goodluck to future readers ?

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