Oblivion Online - Reviews

Started out good but I do not approve the direction in which this novel is going. I've gotten to chapter 170 in the raws and the MC is still alone in his shelter. There is almost no human contact which makes the novel terribly boring.There's almost zero sense of growth in the MC. He behaves the same as when he just started.No emotional issues as well which is not what you would expect in an apocalypse novel. He spends days alone in his shelter and even his first kill did not bother him.Overall, the novel becomes terribly repetitive and uninteresting due to the complete lack of relationships and character growth. Do not read.

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Instead of giving it the impressive name of God's realm you should give the title the idiotics realm. It's story isn't nice. The Author completely ruined the main character. The story is full of idiots. I don't have any good points. Too much nonsense talk. I thought it atleast have humour, none all all.

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Early in the novel the mc straight up enslaves a woman because she's strong in the future. Needs a slavery tag as I wouldn't have bothered to read the chapters I did if it had it. I also wonder if these reviews are fake or everyone who reads this is just okay with the mc performing a soul enslavement on an innocent woman.

The story is alright, there are some grammar mistakes here and there but not to many, not a bad read but isn't an amazing one either. I think with a little more work, and editing it can be a pretty decent read. Keep it up the more you work on this the better you'll Improve. That's all I got to say but this is a pretty ok story, keep up the good work.

been having a blast, the comedic moments are gold

Love their story. Just a little bit curious,  what happen to Yichen? He is a sweet boy.

A small diamond appears in my vision.

My eyes were wide-open after hearing that story, I did not expect anything like that.

When Bayan, James and Matthew arrived at the chief house, Bayan saw a middle aged man who wore serious expression on his face, his short-white hair and mustache paired with two eyes that full of intelligence make him look like a wise and noble man.

"I simply cast away the enchantment concealing your form for a few seconds, but I see the answer now. Your father was the archangel, Michael, judging from the wings and you wear the crown of your mother, Lilith, queen of the devils. How old are you?" the dragon asked his question casually, it was almost like he didn't even do anything wrong.