Not Just A Luna; I Am Alpha! - Reviews

Does this book has a second part?

Does god of mischief give him any other skill aside from clone?

For someone blessed as an envoy he didn't receive enough gift or isn't hacked enough ?‍♂️

Know that I'll rest here, on the Old Stone.
Waiting for you, shall not be anxious.
By your side lying, showing no discomfort.
Timeless Commitment, Obstructions Insignificant.
These are my vows to you old friend.
Made for the sake that you and me will meet again.

Author is too good at writing Charakters and every girl is of superb quality. But I stay strong under the banner of Leng Wuyan being best girl. Fight me, if you dare!

Can you give me a spoiler? Why are the heroines chasing him and becoming yanderes?

I reached around chap 500+, purely because I'm a sucker to this kind of genre. Compared to Superstars of Tomorrow and IRAS, this novel is severely lacking. PROS: It's hard to think of one. The story is in between below average and average... hmmm yup there's nothing stunning about this novel. However, if you have nothing to read and waiting for updates then this might do the trick. Also around chapter 300, the MC will go to USA, not really a spoiler, just to tell you guys that it will be more relatable because Western works will be used not just Chinese literatures, films and celebrities that we barely know.CONS: Most cons were stated already. The worst thing for me is the story telling. It's practically reading a log or a diary, most chapters just states what did the MC have done that day. The romance is really bad, it has potential at first but the author botched it. The story has no depth along with the characters. Everyone is so shallow and thought of nothing aside MCs looks. There are few good chapters, most of them were dull and just about the MC eating over and over again. The fact that the MC's eating is more detailed than him doing his job or his lovelife is the most frustrating part of this novel. I finally dropped this novel, I tried it a lot of times but just I'm about to drop it, things get interesting. It's like the walking dead prior to the latest season.

so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.

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I wanted to read the story but who would've known that the story just started and a "young master" came out of nowhere to kill the MC. This just ruined my mood and I stopped reading.

It’s a story about a misogynist in a misandrist world. BUt there’s hardly any difference in this world and any other generic plain medieval world on this platform. There are a lot of other minor things that bothered me enough to drop it without reading to full but I’ll mention the most glaring. The mc is supposed to be super smart but the author can’t write him smart. So they made others stupid. He will mention the most obvious common sense stuff and then say others were blown away by his intelligence. He’s basically the one eyed king in the land of blind.The world is misandrist but there’s hardly anything mentioned about it. (Except maybe male red light districts. If it even counts as one.) And the repeated (and frankly stupid in this kind of story based novel) trope about mc ”conquering” women to the point of belief reversal with his tool. Anyway I’ve avoided spoilers (I think). This was not for me. Though author’s grammar is fine(which is a prize here), the writing itself can be improved.

Hi Mate, first time writing a review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. Thats my review. Bye.

this novel could be considered as one of the first ones I ever read related to business category, and it gave me an everlasting flavor. It actually differs from the business category as it adds superpower taste to it, not like those protagonists have some kind of space and whatnot...characters are going to be introduced implicitly gradually without your knowledge, I mean the building of characters is great, for instance you'll know the story of the mother of our FL later on, not at the beginning, and the existence of the half-brother and half-sister of our FL, everything is happening gradually step by step and you'll get engrossed in it later on, as for our ML, the author gives us a glimpse of hi at the beginning and you'll figure him out gradually, as for romance, I think it happens later on as I couldn't wait for updates but the latest thing i can remember is somewhat related to both ML and FL as some guardian of our FL helps 'revive' the grandpa of ML, yup I stopped here cuz I finished reading it as it was new at that time and I don't know if the novel is still going on...still try reading it guys!!!!!!