No Longer A Demon King - Reviews

I read this is the chinese version I absolutely loved this and a little spoiler I couldn't hold in is that the teacher in the mind of soul land 2's main character us probably the same person who was the master of the snail in this book :P

You know, I have gotten used to Chinese novels being nationalistic and maybe have a little bit of spice (racism). But I had a bit of hope in this novel, see, cause the author tries his hardest to convince you he's not racist, you know... but then proceeds to be completely racist. Like I'm fine with the racism most of the time but when the author was like "UwU im not being wacist youw all just too senswitive~" that's what really left a bad taste in my mouth. Like at least have some dignity.This otherwise hilarious and 5-star novel was completely overturned by the veiled racism.

It seems a to be a nice story, with a good world and interessting characters. The backstory of the concubine is tragic and the reborn version is instantly likeable. But that the backstory is partially unknown gives the story tension, that is needed.The characters around him are also likeable, hopefully we see them develope. The adding of new characters is a bit fast, but it is okay, if it didn't continue with the pace it is going. It would be to many characters to keep track of.The englisch is sometimes a bit iffy, but it is mostly tolerable.

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"Then that means its under someone's control. Its black magic." Danish yelled and started to chant a spell. Shaurya saw him and distracted the beast with Priest Dravya and Laksh, so Danish could wash away the mind control. After completing the spell, Danish pulled out a small dagger and aimed it towards the Gaja's back. Priest Dravya saw it and rushed forward to stop him.

"I ain't got time for this shit" Mumbling i got outside locked the door and took my scooter to college.

" Big Brother you woke up "  A voice came outside of the room . When he opened the door he saw Chu Feng . Chu Feng and Chu Xian always trained together Chu Feng said about  Nine colored Lighting which hit him 4 years ago . Chu Xian at the time said that it will Give him a unique power .So they didn't bother with it .

Dai Mubai's brows wrinkled and he said, "You don't understand. I can feel that the atmosphere on that girl's body is similar to mine and it also has a complementing effect feeling. Among spirits, encountering a complementing spirit is extremely difficult. But if you do meet and you team up, one's spirit strength can increase twofold. This ability is called Spirit Harmonization.

So much to do, so much to see

Thid  novel has a great vibe,with the university setting feeling real and the characters ,especilly  kiyato  and Miyano  pulling  you  in.The tension between them adds  a  lot of  intrigue if it add a bit more sensory detail and build on their emotional struggles ,it will be  even more impactful. keep going!..

The story line is good, The story having a good potential to have awsome plot… i really enjoyed reading this story and i am eagerly waiting for next chapter