Nine Artifacts, Elmyr's Last Errand - Reviews

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I have NO.problems with translator at all. Good translation and decent number of updates so good job there buddy. What I have problem with is the story itself how for granted author takes this casual nationalism and balant racism and justifying it by total bs. An irony for a modern novel to have such a back minded author. I can't in my good conscience continue to read this novel so I rather read gourmet from another world. Please read and judge for yourself don't take my word for it and don't blame the translator he's doing a pretty good job on his part

super well written novel. I enjoyed reading it until he got to college ....and thats when the plot got kinda strange...however my advice to the author is to make the main character more consistent (which would improve the progression of the plot significantly). Your MC dabbles in too many things and then abandons them, and he is a little too perfect. Plus there are some major plotholes pushing the plot just to show off the MC's perfect skills and Gary-Stuness.  Take the time to develop his decision making and the thinking that goes into his actions. After reading for awhile i found the MC behaving like a drastically different person every chapter as if he has a split personality disorder. Please to slow down and justify the MC's actions, things happen too fast and for no reason other than his justice-boner. Let the MC enjoy his newfound freedom, I don't understand why you would make him basically return to his old profession when he has limitless potential. Overall this is down to a matter of taste, but to other readers i really do recommend you read this novel as it is significantly better than most novels you find on this site and has plot elements for everyone.

So let me get this straight.  The game allows him to get stronger in real life, but only him.  And only he has a store, and it's considered cruel if a game doesn't have in game purchases all of a sudden?  Seriously?

Wow I really appreciate author fir producing such a gem!the book is in first person narrative, full of mysterious atmosphere. I felt so drawn to the chapters without even realising hehe. The world building is great and the characters are crafted finely.good job author

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It's interesting though. A guy gets a system that helps him do well with school, including the social aspects. Truly a unique find.                  

I really thought this story was deleted. It was in my library and it seems that I can't read it. (Been away for a year) And then I found the announcement chapter and yeeeeees. Followed again ??

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it's so good ive already added in my library

As soon as Yi Long finished speaking, he then opened the door and entered the antique shop.